[RiverClan ~ River] Kingfisher

_{Petalpaw couldn't stop her yawn and the mouse fled. It was the third prey she chased away with the noises she made. The first, a mouse, was alarmed by a sneeze when a little twig tickeled Petalpaws nose. The second was a sparrow and Petalpaw hadn't learned yet how to creep up a bird. She only had one training, she could catch mice, with some effort, but not more than that.
It was nice weather today, it was almost as if it was Greenleaf. The sun shined brightly and there was no cloud to be seen in the blue sky. The apprentice became thirsty and headed off to the river for a drink. When she arrived, she sat down, closed her eyes and listened to the rushing of the water for a moment. Then she opened her eyes again. I wish I could swim, she thought when she looked to the cool water, but Smoketear hasn't leared me that yet. Just when she wanted to lap the water, she saw a bright orange-blue flash. What could it be? With her tongue still hanging from her mouth, she looked around. There she saw the flash again, it ducked to the water and flew up again. It landed in a big bush with branches hanging over the water. Petalpaw watched the little creature as it ate the fish it had cought. She saw it was a bird. A small bird, with a blue back and an orange chest. It had a long beak. A kingfisher, she thought, mum told me about those animals. She forgot that she was here to drink and watched the kingfisher as it flew up again and tried to catch another fish. After a few times, it succeeded and landed on a branch. The fish was almost as half as long as de bird was, but he swallowed it witthout much effort.

Petalpaw didn't know how long she sat there, looking at the kingfisher. After a while, her thirst became bigger and finally, she remembered what she was here for. She lapped up some water with her little pink tongue. Then she smelled something. It was another cat from RiverClan. She turned around. 'Hello.' she said calmly and she wondered who the visitor was.}

FK. goed. Ook mooii dat je het in een plaatje zet !

Loudkit, dit is een rpg gedeelte, weliswaar in het Engels, maar nog steeds een schrijf gedeelte waar je geen commentaar geeft, maar enkel antwoord in een post. Volgens mij ben je in de war met het 'RPG Training' gedeelte (: Voor deze keer, omdat je redelijk nieuw bent, zie ik het door de vingers, maar in het vervolg beter opletten.
Gelieve hier niet in het topic op te reageren, maar dit in pb te uiten.

- Moonstripe

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