Just taking some rest. [By four trees]

With slow passes walks Brightpaw to Four trees. She was a bid tired and her eyes looks sad. She was in love with a cat with the name Moonpaw, bud he wassent in love with her, bud whit another cat whit the name, Snowpaw, she hates her, she was a riverclan and she doesn't like that Moonpaw loves another cat from another clan. It makes her sad, very sad. Slowly she walks further.
After a while she arrived at The Four trees. She looked tired and lay down, ans looked tired in front of her. Then she heard foot steps coming her way. She looked up, and her eyes narrowed. Who was that cat?

[Every cat is welcome]

{youre mentor? XD}

Darkfire was walking across the path in the forest. It was a perfect day, but he dosent matter. Slowly he walks his path. He looks Grumpy, his eyes who likes fire.They Where half closed. He was searching fore his apperentice Brightpaw. The last time they had not trained. He was not satisfied ore happy with it. He dont cares about here, but here scary face. Her fear, he found truly entertaining. His paws, her scent led him to the foure trees. What did she there? he saw her. Then he came out from the bushes. '' What are you doing here?! We have to train little mousebrain!'' Angry do he looks at here. His scar from the eye, was his hallmark. He know that she scared of him. He dont care, and actually he like it.

*Het is eigenlijk nog wel gelukt. ^echt niet verwacht.*

This smell, it brought here cared unresisting feelings.It was some one who makes her depressing, scared, unhappy, sad, every thing that is bad. She looked in his eyes the eyes of a bad cat, of a betrayer! ''What are you doing here?! We have to train little mousebrain!'' Was what her bad mentor. She would look angry, she would kill him, bud she knows if she try to do that, she is the one who dies. Instead of be angry, she was scared she let him see he was the one who has the power of her. 'I am sorry', was what she answered. She led hang her head and looks at the ground. Her eyes was pale. 'W-what are we gonna do today?' Asked she trembling. Why was he here, why not another cat? Why not Snowpaw? Then she can take her rage out of her! Not kill her, bud hurt her, let her see how much she hates her. momentarily let she sense her rage how angry she was, how much she wants to kill some one. Bud she shook that stupid feelings quickly away from her head.

[Hmm i hope that it is good lol]

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