RPG-training [Fake-Gathering][ENGLISH!]

Hi guys, ik heb zin om in het engels te RPGEN. Wat regeltjes;
- Dit is een NEP gathering, iedere Clan mag meedoen.
- In het Engels posten
- Zin limit is er niet echt, alleen wil ik niet dingenz oals; 'Okay,' she said warmly.
- Spellingsfouten maken niet uit, alleen dingen die je kunt weten graag ook doen! Want het is heel erg moeilijk lezen als het echt met veel fouten zit.
- HAVE FUN, mvg. Bluestar
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Splashpaw gazed over the clearing, the four massive trees reflected in his amber eyes. Not knowing where his brother; Ripplepaw was, he began to wander around. A soft sigh rolled over his lips, as he tasted the air for some interresting scents.
Bored as hell, looking at the huge group of cats, waiting for some company.

I wanna do, i wanna do!
Ok zelf ben namelijk Engels, na half Engels ;D Mijn mother is Engels, mijn Father Netherlands.

Brightpaw was waiting till the Gathering should begin. When her leader said, 'Lets go', she was running to Four threes. She looked of there was some another apprentices. There was one. A Shadow clan cat. Shallowly walks she to the cat. 'Hello, i am Brightpaw, and who are you?' Asked she. She Smiles friendly to the cat. 'Is this you first Gathering?' Asked she.

With fleety pawsteps, Strawberry made her way to the gathering. The young she-cat closed her eyes for a moment, enjoying the feeling of the wind coursing through her fur, but after that, she bounded down the slope that marked the entrance of fourtrees. Excitement made her paws fizz once she looked around. So many cats! She thought. Now she started to feel a bit nervous though. Gingerly, she inched closer to the thong of cats.

A voice from behind him, made him jump a little. He smiled friendly, as he turned around to face the small ThunderClan apprentice. She overloaded him with questions, and he simply grinned. 'I'm from ShadowClan, the name's Splashpaw.' He answered, 'yes this is my first Gathering.' He added warmly.
'Ehm, maybe this is a odd question to ask. But have you seen an apprentice, which looks exactly like me? It's my little brother,' the last thing he purred, and his eyes shone with pride.
His eyes catched another cat, she was to old to be a apprentice, but to young to be a senior warrior. 'Hi there!' He called over the clearing.

Ghostpaw slowly followed his leader to the Gathering. Today was the day he would experience his very first Gathering. Yet he wasn't expecting too much of it. Various scents crept into his nostrils while he approached the other cats who were going to attend the Gathering too. He looked around with his bright, green eyes, looking for someone he knew. The first cat he recognized was Splashpaw, another Apprentice from the ShadowClan. He nodded towards some other, unknown cats, and walked straight to Splashpaw. When he sat down next to the other Apprentice, he noticed the ThunderClancat that was sitting next to Splashpaw. "Hi, my name's Ghostpaw," he introduced himself with a flimsy smile. He was just in time to hear the ThunderClancat introduce herself as Brightpaw. Somewhat nervously he cleared his throat. He had no idea what he actually expected from this whole Gathering.

From a distance you couldn't see the apprentice, that came over to join the small group. It was an Apprentice from is own Clan, Ghostpaw. His looks made the background swallow him in the dark night, only his bright green eyes were visable.
Curiousity flooded him, as he saw the four leaders padding up the great rock. His amber look was glancing to the other apprentices again. 'Hey Ghostpaw,' he smiled.

Lavenderheart looked around. The other RiverClan cats were around her. The full moon that lay in the sky filled the territory around them in pale, silver light. The slender she-cat quickly followed her leader when she saw they were near Fourtrees. When her leader flicked his tail she entered the gathering place, walking down the grassy slope on their side of the territories. Immediately, she spotted some cats from other Clans, ThunderClan and ShadowClan. With a kind expression she walked over to Strawberry.

Winterstorm looked around her. It was the night of the full moon and that meant that there would be a gathering. The cats wre already gathered and were waiting for the leader to start. Finally the leader began to walk and the other cats followed. This wasn't her first gathering, but it was still exciting. It didn't took long before they came at the gathering place and when she looked at the place, she saw already some other cats. When she got the sign, Winterstorm began to ran down to the other cats. She looked around for any cats she could talk to. She began to walk through the other cats, looking around if she could find a cat who was alone, because then he or she maybe wanted some company.

With soundless steps a young she-cat trippeld up to Fourtrees. She was surroundend by her Clan and her friends offcourse. Her strange yelloow eyes peeked up at the sky while the moon shone bright down on her. A smile started to show up at her face. The moment she ran down with her Clan she looked to all the other Clans. There were so many cats! Was it allways like this? She didn't know, this was her first Gathering after becoming an apprentice. Yet again she smiled and slowely walked up to some other apprentices. ''Hi,'' she said it with a faint smile on her face. Her voice wasn't loud or sharp. Her eyed examined the other apprentices. She really didn't now what else to say to them.

Splashpaw recognized the apprentice 'Moonpaw' from his own Clan, it was getting buzy. If Ripplepaw was here, he'd probably ran away. Splashpaw hoped he was okay, and a sudden shiver ran over his back.
He gave a quick lick over his tabby chest, when he sighed softly. 'Hello, Moonpaw. How are you doing?' He muttered, with a little smile. Al of a sudden he felt really tired, his thoughts were going out to the Apprentice den. Where he rolled himself up to a tiny ball, beside his brother, his nose tucked into his paws, with his fluffy tail drapped over his eyes.
He felt a cold breeze across his whiskers, twitching them, he looked at all the cats. The muttering sounds made him feel more awake.
'I'm bored.' He joked, warmly.

Moonpaw stared up at the sky once again. she thought is was very attractive, that beautiful blue sky. one of the apprentices was Splashpaw, and Ghostpaw was there to. She smiled shortly and looked up when she heard someone sight. She looked up and saw is was Splashpaw who has sighed. ''Hello, Moonpaw. How are you doing?'' Splashpaw muttered. She lay her eyes on her feet and looked back up. ''Well, I guess I'm fine,'' she spoke in her soft voice, she smiled friendly. ''And how about you?'' She gazed around en blinked for a split second. Then she turned her head back to Splashpaw and dropped her head an inch. She dind't feel very comfortble in the croud.

Appletree walks to the Fourtree and looks for cats she knows but don't see anyone so she sits down and breaths the air in and smells Thunderclan cats. Appletree liks her wounded leg that has started to heal again and smiles to some cats that walk by hoping for anyone to talk to her she sighs and lays her hand down on the ground looking at some cats. "Hello" Appletree says to a cat that walks past her. When the cat turns around she smiles at the Cat. "Im Appletree who are you?" She smiles warmly still and sits up the wound on her paw has a nice scab on it. "Which clan are you from?'

Ik ben beter in Engels RPGen merk ik haha iemand erop reageren??

Fourtrees.. There was a meeting! She was thrilled to go there, because so many cats would be there to listen to the Clanleaders. Kittyheart loved the company of other cats, because it allowed her to talk a lot; something she really liked to do. But everyone seemed to have someone to talk to.. everyone seemed to have a conversation in which they didn't need her. Kittyheart frowned; that wouldn't be so great, to spend all of her time here alone! It would be pretty boring, actually.. Kittyheart wasn't planning to stay alone, so she walked over to the cats quickly, hoping to see someone alone or wandering around. Luch was on her side, it seemed, for she soon saw a white she-cat walking through the crowd. She didn't recognize the cat, but yeah, meeting other cats would be fun, wouldn't it? So she walked over to the white cat and gave her a warm smile. 'Hello! How are you doing? I'm Kittyheart,' she introduced herself. 'From which Clan are you?' Curiosity always was her main boost to talk to other cats, though she was just hyperactive at all times. Anyways, she looked at the white cat, willing to listen to answers.

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