(Rogue Territory) [Open]

Onderwerp: (Rogue Territory) [Open] zo 12 mei 2013 - 2:05

The tom-cat once more looked deep in the eyes of the strange she-cat, with a belt like Cookie had. BloodClan, the cat's called cats with a belt like that. 'Why are you from BloodClan don't you wanna be a free cat without killing and having fun and friends?' If this was real, Phanter wouldn't even dare to ask this, but he knew it was a dream, it was raining and he didn't feel cold. The she-cat jumped playful around the rogue, and then ran away. The weird dream Phanter had faded away.

Phanter just waked up in his den, in his nest. He always had strange and weird dreams. The cat rememberd what Sasha told him about dreams. But Phanter didn't want to lose time for the hunt it was already leaf-fall! If didn't had enough prey for whole Leaf-bare, he should had to hunt in snow! He really hated to do that! Well: Then you need to work, phanter. He tought and walked out of his den. He sniffed the air for prey but couldn't find prey. The cat walked more and more deeper the forest in. He got lost, again. He smelled another cat's scent! Was he on the rogue territory from another cat!?
He just hoped he wouldn't get in a fight.. Then, a cat showed up.

Crystal was hunting in her rogue territory. Already soon she notice a mousse, she just wanted to kill it when the mouse scares of something and ran away to his safely home. 'Moussedrek!' She whispered to herself. She looked around to see of what the mousse was scared. She saw a gray striped tom-cat. 'Hé, what are you doing here? You don't belong here!' She screamed angry to the cat. She came closer to the cat whit her hair in her neck which came up. She shows the cat her sharp nails and teeth. She growled a little to scare the cat away from her territory. He didn't seems to want a fight, but she couldn't be sure enough. She stared the cat in his eyes, she didn't knew his name. Fast she asked his name. 'What is your name anyway?' Her tail swings back and forward. She didn't wanted to be friendly, but she also didn't wanted to attack him. She didn't know what she really wanted.

sorry ik ben niet zo goed in engels , maar wou het gewoon eens proberen.

It was an orange she-cat that was looking to him. ''Hé, what are you doing here? You don't belong here!' She screamed very angry to Phanter. The She-cat showed her sharp claws and theet, and so did Phanter. ''Since when this is your territory? Phanter hissed back at the she-cat and kinda warned her. 'What is your name anyway?' the she-cat asked quickly. Her tail swinged back and forth and so did Phanter's tail. His ears perked. ''It's Phanter, now you tell yours,'' Phanter answered quickly. He was ready for a fight but didn't really wanted to fight. But if it must to defend it's territory, he'd fight. He wasn't really a bad fighter, but also not a good one.

ben ook niet zo goed in engels, *ziet nu pas dat waked up woke up moet zijn xD*
maar hoe meer je in het engels leest/post/luisterd etc. hoe beter je er in wordt. ^^

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